英语是湖北专升本统考科目，写作部分一直是英语考试的压轴戏。写作是一个可以快速提分的部分，同学们可以通过背诵一些优质模板，提升作文的亮点。
Writing 1
2016年，中国女排教练郎平又一次吸引了世人的目光。请你用英语写一篇介绍郎平的文章向《二十一世纪英文报》投稿，内容包括:
1.现任中国女排主教练;
2.曾任中国女排队长，带队多次获得世界冠军
3.带领中国女排赢得里约奥运会金牌。注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
【范文】
Have you watched the 2016 Rio Olympic Games? lf you have, you must be impressed by the China women's national volleyball team, especially by Lang Ping.Lang Ping is the current head coach of the China women's national volleyball team. She once was a volleyball player and the captain of the team, and won the World Championship many times with her team members. in 2016, Lang Ping guided the China national team to the goldmedal in the Rio Olympic Games.
Not only we Chinese but also the whole world takes great pride in such an excellent person.
Writing 2
假如你是李华，你校学生会组织部分同学在社区开展了一次环保活动。请你根据提示给美国朋友Car1写封电子邮件介绍此次活动:
1.活动时间;
2.活动内容
3.活动感受
注意:
1.词数100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
3.考虑写作中能够用到的词汇:clean-up,organize,collect litter,call on等
【范文】
Dear Carl,
Last Saturday, some of us students went to the local community to do some clean-up to protect the environment, which was organized by our Student Union.We gathered at the school gate early in the morning, and upon arrival, we set about working. Divided into several groups, some of us collected litter around the community, and some helped put the rubbish into the dustbins. Meanwhile, some other students handed out brochuresthat we'd prepared beforehand, callina on people to do what thev could for a clean environment.
Our work was over that day, but l know that there's a long way to go before we really enjoy aclean environment and this needs everyone's effort.Yours,
Li Hua
亮点解析:
1.文章首句运用了do some clean-up, was organized by,which引导的非限制性定语从句,这些都是亮点,可谓开篇不凡。
2.活动过程叙述自然,使用了过去分词/现在分词作状语、that引导的限制性定语从句、what引导的宾语从句和高级词语upon arrival,set about, handed out等。
3.结尾描述感受时使用了句型there's a long way to go before,当属点晴之笔。
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